Wow, it was, erm...concise. And with rather a lot of fantastical elements. My advice would be to gain a greater grasp of the English language before attempting other projects. But the storyline was certainly intriguing, if a little wacky and out there!

That was retarded as shit.

Wow. What a rollercoaster. I laughed, I cried, I screamed, I was in a glass case of all these emotions and more. This fic was pure genius. Please, dear writer. Submit this to Del Ray. I insist that you become the official Hitman franchise writer.