Really excellent. At last Tenchi has a voice.

Very interesting fic. Like the pairing. Don't see that very often.

Excellent

That was...kind of...unusual. But unusual is good! We need more unusual in this fandom!

I like the way you handled that...getting there so progressively and logically-I could never have imagined it happening like this!-and leaving out all of the gritty details.

A well-done story with a unique twist. Two thumbs up! :-)