|Reviews for jasons journey|
| afred 3/23/13 . chapter 2
my apologies i wasnt talking about the 2 posters in the bottum i was talking about a insultive review that i deleted sorry for the misunderstanding
| Guest 3/21/13 . chapter 1
Apparently you have a problem with constructive criticism.
Simply put, you need to improve your writing before publishing. As it stands now, it's unreadable.
| afred 3/9/13 . chapter 1
Well you sir are a fucking queer apparently your mom never fucking loved you it's weird really I know more things then you and actually get a account and or are you a coward and no I'm not going to respect those he disrespects me so kill yourself
| Superhero geek 1/2/13 . chapter 1
it's great for the most part. its kinda hard to understand becuase you didn't use quotation marks.
| Onimiman 12/31/12 . chapter 1
yeh, one problem to this; try to make this readable with paragraphs.