my apologies i wasnt talking about the 2 posters in the bottum i was talking about a insultive review that i deleted sorry for the misunderstanding

Apparently you have a problem with constructive criticism.

Simply put, you need to improve your writing before publishing. As it stands now, it's unreadable.

Well you sir are a fucking queer apparently your mom never fucking loved you it's weird really I know more things then you and actually get a account and or are you a coward and no I'm not going to respect those he disrespects me so kill yourself

it's great for the most part. its kinda hard to understand becuase you didn't use quotation marks.

yeh, one problem to this; try to make this readable with paragraphs.