I see you're incorporating some 13 scenes into this story now. I like it :D
See ya next update!

0yF

Awww...this moment b/w them was soooooooo KAWAIII! ;) loved it.

Shitty balls, why do I always love stories with these kind of plots? Update soon, darling, I hope to read more of this story.

Thanks for leaving us hanging... again...
But it is quite great yet annoying at the same time. I wonder when light can finally just give hope the clear answer: I am going because of you and I am here to make sure that u are not going to die, it wouldn't be right. -kisses-
So hope u can update this fic really soon, need to know what happens and how this is going to conclude

no don't let them fall to their deaths, they need to get married! Well its final fantasy, main characters don't die easily so nothing to worry about 3. Yeah, light that is the way to get hope to change his mind, you should do it more often :* wink wink. well hope you update this lovely fic soon, like you always do

So it turns out everyone is going to Eden. Wow, Lightning totally knows how to wrap Hope around her finger. Though the kiss was a great way to change his mind haha. I think Hope needs to find a way to get Lightning to listen to him when the time comes. Wonder when that will happen? Wish he can be more dominant once in a while, while she can be submissive. Well, I currently hate that you are leaving chapters on cliffhangers. No more dramatic cliffes plz, the last one just killed me for the whole week. I love how Hope is always so protective of Light, so sweet...
Are they currently crashing to the Vile Peaks? update soon!

Yay, chapter update! What is it with you and cliffhangers, btw? :P
See ya next update!

0yF

I am currently pressing the reload button on my phone waiting for a new chapter to be updated. Please update I am begging u

This story is always so addictive and moving. I especially live the fact that hope and light's relationship is repairing itself to a more stronger and loving relationship, making it stronger than it once was. I hope u update the next chapter soon and I wish you great luck with the other chapter as well since both hopexlight stories are amazing and the plot is well written. At the end when light reveals the truth of her feelings, making this chapter really special even though it ended in a dramatic cliffhanger. Wish you can update later today!

Wahah don't make them die, it's too depressing I don't want my favorite pairing to end with a bomb explosion is like serah but who cares about snow he can die for all I care Sure lightning kind of have them her blessing but still... At the end of the story, I want the main marriage to be hopexlight and them having babies yay!

knowing the story's concept, you are not going to just end with them dying and even if they did it will be too much to handle. the main protagonists never die especially the two main characters that just confess their love for one other. light told hope the truth of her feelings, hope now assured that lightning loves him as much as he loves her, what else is there for her to hide? so what is going to happen after the bomb is just going to be dud? i think light can no longer play "being hard to get" as good as she use to with hope so what else can she do but be pulled back into his arms? please update soon... really soon...

NO! THEY CAN'T DIE! YOU'RE EVIL! Lol
See ya next update!

0yF

this chapter was great even though it wasn't as "hot" as the other 2 chapters, if you get what i mean. still hope you update like really soon sometime this week. i wonder who is betraying the academy? and whether how light and hope is going to stand it being apart for a while. poor hope and light, light is beginning to realize more of her mistake causing hope's unhappiness, so while light's regret begins to come into the surface more i wonder what is going to be the result of hope once he is going to the one place that will definitely have his head.

Glad to see you updated!
So Hope is heading to Lightning's old home city huh? That is a huge risk, is he going to get himself killed especially what happened 7 years ago? So is lightning and serah heading to Obera or somewhere? Or is lightning probably going to run away and sneak her way to follow her man? Hey if that's not the case then I can't wait to see light and fang clash to clash with disagreements and rivalry. Knowing fang she will probably tease light with her complicating love life since fang is usually one of the people that can get under light's skin at some times though not as much as hope of course -wink-.
So who is the deceiver, Alyssa I assume? Idk she seems to be.
I hope light and hope's separation isn't that long like 4 to 6 chapters but hey maybe the farther apart the more they will think and miss one another right? I like it when writers write their character's feeling and emotions especially if it is about resolve and romance. Maybe it will give light the time to think about their relationship more and her love for hope.
I kind of wish light will get more emotional or showing her emotions more especially if there are thoughts and feelings of her love for hope. There could be a slight chance that she will have a really great dream about hope and her together that she will probably end up crying in her sleep until serah will wake her up and finding out what lightning's been hiding imaginations
Anyway enough of my hopes, please and please update soon!
Like on Wednesday or Thursday?

Hmmm...is this going into the final fantasy XIII storyline? Would be interesting!