*shivers* Umbridge is such a bloody cow! Gutted for Hannah, Cedric's death must have so rocked the Hufflepuff's and then for Umbridge to come in and be just how she is... Gah the woman makes me so so freaking angry!

*scowls* Great writing though, trust me you definitely got an emotional response with this one :P

Owwwwwwww! I hate Umbitch. I really do. This was good :) I never imagined Hannah being very outspoken, but perhaps that's because she is such a lesser-known character? I may have to play with the idea for awhile *mischevious grin*

Round of applause to you!
Ami

She wouldn't use the blood quill on everyone, I think it was just for Harry.

Oh God. Umbridge's quill. It is seriously unnerving.

This was a nice piece. It seems like Hannah is such an easily overlooked character, but you gave her depth. I loved that. And her fierce Hufflepuff loyalty to Cedric was also refreshing.

Spelling and grammar were good. And you did a rather interesting take on the prompt. Excellent job.