Its so AWSOME COULD YOU MAKE SOME MORE PLEASE AND THANK YOU:-)

Hmm, is Kyto a good guy in this story? Because, in the books he tried to destroy Pixie Hollow on numerous occasions.
Btw, I really like the chapter. Oh, I do hope Vidia doesn't loose her wings.

Good chapter, keep'em comin'!

No! Mila! Is she dying?! Don't let Mila die! Ow that must've hurt, update soon!

Pets? Ahh so thats what marking is for!
Update soon cos i am confused
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Awesome! Can't wait for more, please update soon!

PLEASE COMPLETE THE STORY, I LOVE IT.

I love how you included Prilla. But, I find it hard to believe that fairies would cut down a tree.

I'm not quite sure i understand why Vidia doesn't go to the banquets. I haven't read the books, so i don't really know about any of the stuff you said in the author's note either... I really love the story though, and i can't wait for more!
Wolf of IndigoRiver

Ha, ha, ha! Vidia is with the Grimlems. Didn't expect that.

I am amazed! This story just gets better and better, with so much improvement! I kinda feel like my English teacher now... And I am extra happy you updated your story, cuz no one else has for days!
Wolf of IndigoRiver
P.S. Why didn't they just begin digging at the tunnel to get Vidia out?

Huray vidia is saved! sort of...
antagonist? i thought that was the cave...
Can u have another chapie up tomorow? pretty please with a sour plum on top?

The third chapter is wonderful! Great job. :D I hope things get better for Vidia soon. :)

Well, she's starving, but at least Vidia has water. She could last awhile without food, as long as she's got water. This story is awesome, and I can’t wait to read more! Please update soon! Oh, and I’ve thought about the banquet at the Queen’s palace, and how Vidia never shows up. Is there a reason why she never shows up? Yes or no, but don’t tell me the reason if there is one! I really don’t want it to be spoiled… Love this story, more please!
Wolf of IndigoRiver

Thanks for the update, i love it so far :D x