cant wait to read more

I have lost soo much sleep in the past 44 hours to finnish reading up to this point! This Fanfiction is ADDICTING! Please update soon! ...but maybe not TOO soon because finals start in 9 days... D: I'll NEVER STUDY! hahaha! :D

please update soon I love this :D

This is a very good story! I'm waiting anxiously for a new chapter :)

Whoohooo! I was so exited when I got a email saying you'd uploaded a new chapter! :D And I think this was a good chapter, although I have to admit I'm worried sick about Jareth. I hope he is alright, guess I'll find out in the next chapter Eh? :) I loved the how Jareth showed Sarah his scars, I hope he tells her that he loves her again :) anyway I'm very exited to read the next chapter! :) x upload soon!

Does Sara have her baby yet?

Keep on going, is what she said!

Ha, enjoying this!

You work for the Disney company?! Gosh, you're so lucky. I guess my comment for this chapter makes sense, then. For some reason, the beginning reminds me of a scene from "Beauty and the Beast", the one where Beast is trying to think of something nice to give Belle and asks Cogsworth's advice on the matter.

Love the story. Wonder what else will V try to hurt Sarah and what happened to Jareth face that had left such a scar? Update soon:)

Good chapter. I can not wait to see if finally jareth tell his feelings for Sarah. Valentine will surely be angry and decides to take revenge more. I am more anxious to see if jareth find the person responsible for the poison. in tk I too look forward to the next chapter.

Very sweet his showing his vulnerability to Sarah, but man alive, he needs to just verbally tell her how he is feeling. Looking forward to the action filled chapter. Hope your trip to Disney was grand.

Hee, the goblin market. This should be fin. Can't wait for mooooore

Finally an update...but really short... :( Cant wait what happen next chapter Goblin market sound exciting...Wonderful moment between Sarah and Jareth..

Well I for one am very conflicted about this story. I'm surprised Sarah just jumped into this whole marriage proposal with only Jareth's words of promising to provide and protect. That's probably my biggest issue; even if she did have underlying feelings for him after the whole labyrinth ordeal. Not the smartest thing to agree to, but it does start the story off. Oh god, Valentine. I must admit I was not happy about this. I am fiercely overprotective when it comes to Sarah and Jareth, so when other characters with romantic relations with either of them enter into the picture I get queasy from how angry it makes me. She genuinely seems to be in love with Jareth, so I do sympathize with her loss of him marrying. I do like seeing from her point of view. It's nice to get that from the so called "bad guy". Which from what I can tell she's done nothing wrong but love Jareth. Besides all that it's a fantastic story and it's written well. Can't wait to catch up and read the rest!