|Reviews for The Penpal|
| heather.murray.9237 5/7/13 . chapter 42
:( Still waiting to see the next chapter!
| PutASmileOnThat 4/9/13 . chapter 42
Oh my goodness... This chapter is so SAD! The last line nearly made me cry! Please update quickly!
| kaitlinkoch20 4/9/13 . chapter 42
Please keep on writing its gatting better.
| xxoikilluoxx 4/8/13 . chapter 42
Awww poor Kagome i feel so bad please update soon
| Jelly-Me 4/8/13 . chapter 42
Waaah! That is so so so so so SAD. 'She had lost two fathers' Oh god, if your goal was to make people cry, you succeded! By the way, I have a feeling I know what'll happen to Inuyasha's mum... But what happened to his DAD I had not seen coming. When it explained that Kagome's mother had only had that reaction once, and something terrible was going to happen, I'd thought Kagome's grandmother was the one that had died. But this is even sadder...
On another note... For seven/six year olds to be so fluent in grammar and spelling is unbelievable. When I was in kindergarton, it was an accomplishment if you knew how to spell your name! No matter how much help a child would have, seven year olds (and under) would barely even know what a full stop or question mark is. The amount of knowledge you make them have is unrealistic. And when it's Kagome's POV you make her able to think complete coherent thoughts. She's only six in this. For example, "Kagome thought her mother had lost all capacity for composure when her father passed." is something you wrote. A child would have thought something more along the lines of this, "Kagome thought her mother didn't try to look very nice when her father left." You need to make her thoughts- no actually Inuyasha and Kagome themselves- more childish. I really like this drabble series though. I will not continue reading this though if it ends in Sesshomaru/Kagome. :P
| pokemoneeveeforever 4/8/13 . chapter 42
NU! INUTASHIO WILL NOT DIE! Even if he is dead... XD
| FoodFanatic 4/7/13 . chapter 40
OMG! this chappie was sooooo KAWAIII!
especially the part where it says: "3. She would never, ever, feed her baby green baby foods."
I have been waiting for forever for you to update an I am SOOOOOO happy that you did so! :D
Keep the updates coming! I LUV THIS STORY!
. Inu doesn't sound like Inu...he almost sounds like...should I say it?
*dramatic pause* : fluffy
NO! I just didn't!
But anyhoo-away from my randomness-i cant wait to get to the point where Kagome meets her betrothed, whether it be InuYasha or Jakotsu (shivers...that's scary); this story will keep attracting my attention.
Write on! ;)
| The Path of Supreme Conquest 4/7/13 . chapter 40
This is so confusing.
I already have some future theories, but I am still very much confused and in the dark about everything, so my theories aren't very helpful.
| Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 39
When are you updating? I like your story and want to read more, pretty please.
| pokemoneeveeforever 3/15/13 . chapter 39
I don't get it. Is that good or bad?
| kaitlinkoch20 3/13/13 . chapter 39
Please write more, its getting very nteresting.
| xxoikilluoxx 3/12/13 . chapter 39
great chapter please update soon
| kari 3/11/13 . chapter 39
So cute! Kari approved!
| DragonLadyRelena 3/11/13 . chapter 39
Wow! Three chapters in one day! You can't beat that! I'm so proud of you! (It was three chapters, yes?)
So what's buried by the well? A sacred jewel shard, perhaps? Who knows?
Can't -simply CANNOT-wait for the next chapter!
May the muses continue to smile, and I hope to see the next update soon!
| InuDemoness1525 3/11/13 . chapter 39
interesting! i wonder what the metal thing is. at first i kinda thought it might be shippou hiding in a den but when you said it was metal, well i have no idea now. thanks for the quick updates this is great :)