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| Matrix Refugee 2002-09-10 ch 4, | abuseLOL! ROTFL!! This is a scream!!!!! Keep up the good work; I can't wait to see the rest of this. Lotsa fun so far; I love how you kinda took apart some of the "A.I." conventions...David stealing Joe's jacket: Mmm, I've wanted to do that! And seeing what the Hounds are really like when they're not chasing Mechas: HEE-HEE-HEE!!! Love it! Love it! |
| Lady Neferankh 2002-09-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseNot Bad Ista!I just finished rereading this and it really made me giggle in some places. This really is pretty funny keep writing! I can hardly wait to see what your going to write about David and Joe's trip to Rouge City!As a fellow A.I. fanfic writer I wish you Inspiration! |
| Jester Fraser 2002-08-12 ch 4, | abuseNative American side: *is dying of laughter and its all your fault!*very funny huh? White side: X.x *is dead of laughter* |
| Kawaii Spinel Queen of Evil 2002-08-10 ch 4, | abuseWheeeeeee! Very funny! I should see to it that Sapphire Rose reads this! She loves AI stuff. Or has she already read it? Dunno, guess I'll check and then see if she wants to, because it's a really funny story! I'll shut up now.... |
| Kawaii Spinel Queen of Evil 2002-08-07 ch 3, | abuseAwwww poor Joe... *Snatches jacket* BWHAHAHAHA!! Ummmm never mind... This is great and really funny! Keep it up! |
| Se 2002-08-05 ch 2, anon. | abuse"Take me with you, Shiny Man!" ROFL. That's good stuff, right there. The whole story's pretty damn clever. Keep on writing. I'm enjoying this greatly. |
| Kawaii Spinel Queen of Evil 2002-08-05 ch 2, | abuse*falls off chair* LMAO! This is funny! Poor Joe..... *Glomps Joe, but then remembers she's supposed to be an Owen Wilson fangirl and then runs off to glomp Vann, Chris, Roy, or any other OW character in need of a glomping* |
| Jester Fraser 2002-08-04 ch 2, | abuseLOL!! I like this! Write more please! |
| TRJessie579 2002-08-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseLOL! Oh, man, this is great...^_^ Martin's so nice, ain't he? "Go to the Flesh Fair!" Heh, I like Joe's new nickname...and the fact that Teddy's character is a bit...different. Any-who...cute fic! Can't wait for the rest! |
| Kawaii Spinel Queen of Evil 2002-08-02 ch 1, | abuse*Laughs her head off* This is hilarious! Very, very funny! I can't wait for more! |
| Laurie E. Smith 2002-08-01 ch 1, | abuseOne acronym: ROFL! Clever and deftly written; reminds me a bit of Douglas Adams... my favorite line so far: "The noodle salad might kill him anyway, but to be able to TASTE! What joy!" Eagerly awaiting the next course -- er, installment. |