LOL! ROTFL!! This is a scream!!!!! Keep up the good work; I can't wait to see the rest of this. Lotsa fun so far; I love how you kinda took apart some of the "A.I." conventions...David stealing Joe's jacket: Mmm, I've wanted to do that! And seeing what the Hounds are really like when they're not chasing Mechas: HEE-HEE-HEE!!! Love it! Love it!

Not Bad Ista!I just finished rereading this and it really made me giggle in some places. This really is pretty funny keep writing! I can hardly wait to see what your going to write about David and Joe's trip to Rouge City!As a fellow A.I. fanfic writer I wish you Inspiration!

Native American side: *is dying of laughter and its all your fault!*very funny huh?

White side: X.x *is dead of laughter*

Wheeeeeee! Very funny! I should see to it that Sapphire Rose reads this! She loves AI stuff. Or has she already read it? Dunno, guess I'll check and then see if she wants to, because it's a really funny story!

I'll shut up now....

Awwww poor Joe... *Snatches jacket* BWHAHAHAHA!! Ummmm never mind... This is great and really funny! Keep it up!

"Take me with you, Shiny Man!" ROFL.
That's good stuff, right there. The whole story's pretty damn clever. Keep on writing. I'm enjoying this greatly.

*falls off chair* LMAO! This is funny! Poor Joe..... *Glomps Joe, but then remembers she's supposed to be an Owen Wilson fangirl and then runs off to glomp Vann, Chris, Roy, or any other OW character in need of a glomping*

LOL!! I like this! Write more please!

LOL! Oh, man, this is great...^_^ Martin's so nice, ain't he? "Go to the Flesh Fair!"
Heh, I like Joe's new nickname...and the fact that Teddy's character is a bit...different. Any-who...cute fic! Can't wait for the rest!

*Laughs her head off* This is hilarious! Very, very funny! I can't wait for more!

One acronym: ROFL! Clever and deftly written; reminds me a bit of Douglas Adams... my favorite line so far: "The noodle salad might kill him anyway, but to be able to TASTE! What joy!" Eagerly awaiting the next course -- er, installment.