| Reviews for Nina and Zero's Relationship |
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Alyssa V 2/22/13 . chapter 9 Please make a ton more chapters! So good! |
kesharocks1071 2/23/13 . chapter 9Please write more! This story is so addicting! I love it! I wish I was Nina... |
hannah 2/19/13 . chapter 9 Well that was good but the kids never came into it they should make the last chapter longer and do u think that theyt will make more episodes of save me lollipop ? |
James Birdsong 2/15/13 . chapter 9 Excellent fanfic. Good chapters. |
Alyssa V 2/2/13 . chapter 8 OMIGOSH! I was laughing though out the whole entire story! Great fan fic love it.. Best I've read so far! KEEP WRITTING AND POSTING! |
JERRYXOX 1/3/13 . chapter 6 I can't wait FOR THE NEXT CHAOTER KEEP ON WORKING HARD I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY RATE UP TO 10 STAR! *_* |
FINN 1/3/13 . chapter 6 Oh my god I can't wait for the next chapter I hoPe it turns out the best date ever :D :D |
YOUr myIKr 1/2/13 . chapter 6 OMG! I Was feeling the heat ! *_* On zero's first Pov in chapter 6 Zero you pervert trying to pretend your looking away but your just try to check out on Nina! xD OMG OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE KEEP IT UP! :DD |
FAN FAN 1/1/13 . chapter 3 Ya! Your right! Yamada-San! Maybe zero got Nina pregnant before they were married as you can know "Man can't wait for there ladys" xD Haha Lol anyway zero did say something in the manga that he will "cherish" Nina more but will he be able to wait?! OMG! GONNA FAVORITE YOUR STORY AND AS A FAVORITE AUTHOR ! THANKS FOR MAKING THIS! Zero so romantic 3 0 3 |
sayamichishige 1/1/13 . chapter 1I'm sorry did I offen you? The last time... I said was giving you a compliment... But... i guess.. you hate me.. for saying those things... that hurt you... I'm sorry... Hope things work out... I like your story now... It's really great to see someone working so hard to finish a Mamotte lollipop story since some of the people thinks it's childish to watch and read it.. :( keep working hard I'm here for you Nina-chan :)) Sorry again... |
CJ122 12/30/12 . chapter 2It's pretty good so far (I have yet to read 3-5) but I want to put some comments out there and hope you can tweek it a little. Maybe explain the setting and try to expand the characters. Such as Zero and Nina, their usually blunt and dense about their feelings for each other so if you would make them confess then where is the fun in that, right? I suggest to put in some 'interruptions'. Until you find a perfect chapter, it's like a build up. I think it's suited for your story line, but you are the author, I just enjoy the story. :) |