Mm I believe that not is the end, I will dreaming that Aoshi follow Misao and live happy forever hahaha, kisses

I love it :) It's a good look into Aoshi's mind and what he thinks. It also feels perfectly plausible, knowing the relationship between Misao and Aoshi. It's really beautiful... Thank you :)

Hey..

Amazing as ever..

I've taken to reading up on your work in little bits.. it really is a treat each time.

Great way to draw out the scene.. brilliant and simple word choice(as usual) and a perfect handling of characters.

Thanks once more for this.

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That was really good. You should continue writing forever and a day.

I love it! He slowly comes to realize what he has and without breaking character! I love that! In fact they both stay within character very well and yet manage to grow. Sweet without being too sappy. I love it!

Indescribeably good vignette.. how I wish you could make this a full-blown series, but maybe not, it's great as is.. _

Whe! You listen to F4 also? or just Vic...?

A very satisfying exploration of this curious and haunting relationship.

Beautiful! O.O I bow down to your greatness.

Aw . . . sweet! _

Wow. It's the - it's the rhythm of this, the feeling of inevitability laced through the scenes, through Aoshi's thoughts, that is so captivating. Stories in first person, especially with Aoshi, can be very restricted - even though the narration should give them freedom - but this isn't. We're in Aoshi's head, but only to the extent that he lets us in.

All the scenes in Aoshi's room were brilliantly done - short, nothing extraneous, but creating the atmosphere that characterises this fic. This excerpt is my favourite:

"If I had left, I would have been acknowledging the woman before me. If I had left, I would have been saying that being with her was wrong. If I had left, everything would have changed.

I stayed."

It is the way the words 'I stayed' come in a separate line, giving them an impact no amount of elaboration could have.

Brilliant work. I bow.

This is... gorgeous. Though Megumi and Sanosuke are my couple of choice, this fic has showed me how beautiful this couple can be. I applaude you, because despite that fact that they do not get together at the end (which normally annoys me) this story is flawless.

This was a really, really good story. No mushy, gushy crap, but still sweet enough to make people happy. Good job!

Keep up the wondrous work - this is my favourite of the Aoshi/Misao stories you have written. I am almost persuaded to convert myself to a rabid fan of the pairing, though I'd better stay neutral! That said, I spot no critic's qualms in your story, for you have crafted everything in a simple brilliance, and all is in order and balance.

The scene of Misao snuggling up to Aoshi was especially heartwarming and unique. Again, keep up the fantastic work - I have you listed as one of the authors in my C2 community Rurouni Revival with this story. I look forward to more.

*whistles* very very good. i can almost see aoshi's heart melting and all the A/M fans happily devouring all the WAFF. hehehe...

anyways, i really like your style of writing and how you let Misao be a little more mature than most writers let her be. Wonderfuly entertaing.