|Reviews for Darkness and White|
| lovelace107 4/9/13 . chapter 95
I am such a fan of this story, I can't even count the amount of times I have read and reread it! Can't wait for the next update!
| onesillyone 4/8/13 . chapter 95
I really like this story, it is dangerous and exciting. I try to read all the stories that Smilerose mentions in her notes. Of all the stories that she mention and I read your story is my favorite. I like all the stories but yes, this one is my very favorite. I like to read and help me to learn english. Thank you very much.
| Huds2n 4/5/13 . chapter 94
I figured he would find out about the marriage...matter of public record which is why I was so surprised that hey did that but it may throw him off kilter just a bit...I am not surprised he found someone that is seriously as messed up as him...too bad they can't disappear together :)
| Huds2n 4/5/13 . chapter 95
this story is sooo good! Amy is right though...Simon won't stop until he has her back and he will strike when she least expects it but for her she is always expecting it so that may be his downfall...I fear the pain is not over just yet...
| la vampire susan 4/3/13 . chapter 95
Great chapter! I love your writing, but please proofread! At least write it and give it a day to leave your brain, then proof it! You're such a great writer!
| la vampire susan 4/3/13 . chapter 92
lovely chapter! Felt will got a little out of character in the beginning description of the... ahem... private moment lol.
| kykio88 4/3/13 . chapter 94
First "Darkness" chapter I don't hate! (meaning hate in the good way, you know).
It's exciting and i loooove to see him angry!
| kykio88 4/3/13 . chapter 95
I was kind of worried!
Good to know it was just a writers block and you're ok :)
Now... thanks for the updates!
Yes, Amy is in prision and has to do as Simon says (did you plan it that way or it happens to be a coincidence that his name is simon?).
Life to Amy is shitty right now. And I'm guessing that goes to some other people too, Will for example.
Would it ruin your plans for the plot if Simon had a stroke? A little one, doesn't has to die, just be in a bed for life.
Again! Thanks for writing! hope to read you soon!
| dominiquesb4 4/3/13 . chapter 95
It's getting more and more interesting every chapter! Can't wait to see what's next. No more writer's block!
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| Amez711 4/3/13 . chapter 95
Was soo excited to see updates..trying to play catch up after a the past holiday weekend..lol..can't wait for more..soo love your story!
| wattle 4/2/13 . chapter 95
OMG the start of this chapter had me.
I love the description of Will's smiles - beautiful.
God Simon is evil, another person dead. How scared must she be.
Fantastic writing ppp
| wattle 4/2/13 . chapter 94
Oh I knew they were going to find out with the marriage...
Oh he scares me
| wattle 4/2/13 . chapter 93
So glad you went back and wrote this chapter, this perspective.