 jalna 2004-01-15 . chapter 1 I know this is a old story but I love it so I review. you have captured their character, their weakness, the way eli is not abble to say he care to the people who meant the more for him his self destructor behavior. and it will heve been interesting to explain the past of this history. I know maybe you don't have interest on eli and grace story now but I m wure the will be plenty of person to read your story. good work |