. This story was awesome. Really. I want to read the sequel now and that's what I'm going to do now, so... um Ave Atque Vale ;)

Aw, I love Melody! That little girl is a sunshine :3

Damn, man! Kaelie's insane, no she's nuts! Seriously! Really I couldn'd stop laughing at the cat fight. when Clary pulled out her extensions haha, that was amazing :P

aw, those two... and the other two, they just... aww *smiles widely*

Yeah, I know I love that movie :3 AND I like Adventure Time xp

Oh, my Angel! WHY? Why did you do that? I swear on the Angel fanfics (books) are going to be the death of my... :(

aw . This chapter was perfection, they're so beautiful together! And that song fits them perfectly, OMG!

This is great, you know?! I stuck to my previous comment. I like so much your writting and the idea and... EVERYTHING!

Aw, that was so sweet! I love those to! And I love how Clary's the whole package... she can sing, she can play guitar, she can play the violin, she can dance, she draws... DAMN! She's all in one xp I wouldn't be surprised if she could fly xp

*grins widely* oh, this was even better... *grins even widely*

Aw, this is GREAT! I like it! Really! And I love the way you write, seriously! Not many writers get that from me ;) I may not be a writer but I want to be... so I can be a little critic about it, but nevermind me! Your writing is amazing! Carry on! :3

I absolutely LOVE Lindsey! MY favourite is Radioactive feat Pentatonix

good luck with the tests:)

Let me know when you post what's next ! Love it

I love this story and I will love the sequel! Update soon and how was your problem? I hoped my advice was enough! Hayit'sSerenity