It looks like the Black Knight has a rival in the form of Lt. John Winter. Also it was nice the Ritter spared Amuro allowing him to destroy the missle. I also like how you added the Midnight Fenrir team from Zeonic Front into this chapter. I know the next chapter will have Char returning. I can't wait until then.

I love how you based your character on a great medival warrior and have him use mobile suits that bear the same colors a s that warrior. I hope you write how he uses a Z'gok and a Gelgoog with those co lors. Anyway, I love this story.

Our hero ladies and gentlemen. a man who follows orders from complete scumbags and lets good men go to their deaths.

Oh yeah THIS is a guy I certainly want to root for.

Very nice story! I like what you've done with it so far. It's nice to see some high quality U.C. Fanfics here on FF. I hope you'll be continuing this!