A great story. Very funny.

that was great, i ended reading it giggling. write a second piece about the wedding day or somthing / anything along the same lines

That was so cute and so funny! And the ending was priceless ^_^ Amazing!

I read Teenagers and really liked it, so I like this too.

I loved Teenagers, and I'm sure I would have loved this story, but instead of speech marks, and other stuff, there are weird letters, and I'm (sorry!) a stickler for the stories I read to look like proper stories (yes, I'm a culprit) so I can read without being distracted. Once you sort this out, it will be fantastic, I'm sure!