i just love how all of your stories deal with sexual needs and actions in such a mature way, unlike anything ive read before... it isnt dragged out or ..dirty.. i guess would be a good word. love your stories! this one especially

I loved it I really did.
Although the ending did seem a bit abrupt. It seemed fitting none the less.
This is definitely a universe I'd love to see again if ever you have the need to write a few small look-ins on their lives...
Like how the new loving trio fairs as companions? Does Harry ever find love? Does Dumbledore move in with them after he retires or do they get their own place?
See?
Lots of area for revisits... That is if you decide to...
^_^ ~ZLB

And he trusted me. Why did he trust me? Severus never
trusted anyone!” Harry groaned. Barnes wanted to jerk his hand back. Only his training kept him still. Damn brat still wanted to blame everyone else for his part in the attack! The great Harry Potter could do no wrong!



I think that sounded more like selfhatred...sorry, still don't like the shrinks ;)

I really don't like Jeffrey!
It wasn't Harry fault and I just can't understand how he can stay so cold and angry at him...

What I have read of this story is really good. I think the site had some difficulties... When I went to read chapter three it took me to some other writers story... I don;t know who to email about that so you may want to get that checked out.

Its so angsty and cute! My favorite kind of story.

Sigh. Are you going to write anything sometime again?

Bribes. _Serious_ bribes. Fluttering of eyelashes. Bright, shiny objects.

Eh?

*sniff* that was such a beautiful story!

Normally I don't like slash...but the way you wrote of it, so innocently, so perfectly...it was fantastic! I loved how Sirius slowly fell in love with Snape, and how both he and Remus melted when Severus displayed his cuteness after healing. I wanted to cuddle him too!

I want to let you know that I have read most (if not all) of your Harry Potter stories, and love them all. The psychological basis for each one is so powerful, and makes for such a great plot. I am a student of psychology, so it is immensely fascinating for me to read a fanfic dealing with that which interests me so much.

All the characters were true to themselves (even Snape, as I'm sure he's so delicate and beautiful beneath those many snarky layers) and the plot with Vachel was wonderful too.

All in all, I loved it! :)

Cheers,

Ballad

Okay, first of all let me say this is a wonderful story and I really do like it. The plot and characters are well written and convey what you mean them to. However, personally I found Snape to be so OOC as to be barely rcognisable during most of this. I personally can't see hin breaking down like this, but that's purely personal. You are a good writer and have written a good story, I just don't like your Snape as a matter ofpersonal taste.
Regards,
Floss

A great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I was very touched by love everyone had for Severus. It was all very nicely done. Your use of emotive and evocative language and imagery was very well done. Thank you for writing it.
^_~
DreamWeaver

amazing

Ok, I just finished re-reading the story..

I'm so so sorry! I realise now, I must've been a bit harsh and while I stick by my previous coments about Harry *glares* I did find the non-harry parts to be very enjoyable and some extremely amusing!
(esp. chapter 23 and Sev's little comment about swallowing)
I REALLY REALLY REALLY hope I didn't offend you!
*huggles*

~Lisa

You are an extremely talented writer, the way you describe things, I love the way you write! It's beautiful!
But I'm not sure if I can like your story, I think Harry was badly out of Character for the whole thing (I know he was controlled at one stage) but after that, shifting blame on everyone else, that is NOT Harry, it's the complete opposite, he usually put the blame on himself eg: Cedric, and all.
I cannot enjoy this, it is just so... wrong.
Harry... the way you portrayed him... was horrific and a disgrace to his character. I understand not all endings can be happy ones (no matter how much of a sucker I am for them) and I'm glad Sev found peace with himself and all, but Harry was not Harry at all, it felt like I was reading a whole new character.
It seems blatantly obvious you don't like Harry at all! (You may, but in the story it does not seem like that at all) I absolutely loathed the part where they questioned Vachel with Veritaserum, how u wrote Harry was shifting blame on everyone but himself, how he had to be the 'perfect' one, how he gave out that information on Sev's wards... it was not right! It was not Harry's character!
I can't read a story where harry is not Harry, I can't find this enjoyable, it is so depressing... (Harry I mean)
I cried a lot through it and it made me feel so dirty and depressed, it just wasn't right.

Now, having said all that, I understand why you have mad ehim that way, maybe you felt like you needed to for the fic plot to be like this, but the way you made Harry out to be... it was terribly wrong. I just..., even Snape was severly out of character! I'm sorry if I've offended you it's the last thing I want to do, I gues I just had to get these feelings out... maybe if you re-read the books to get a real feel for Harrys character, or re-wrote the whole story as and original one with original charcater names, the character of Harry was far out enough to be original, more than far out enough. I hope you don't truly view Harry this way, but it does make me feel sick to read those particular parts, I'm sorry if u are offended, you are an extremely talented writer... just this story... well you know.

really enjoyed.

Nice revelation to the story. I like how Severus finally found lpeace with himself.