Great! This is awesome!

Keep going keep going

well that was sad but keep writing can't wait to see there expressions well not really see but you know what I mean

good job man keep it up

I just realised prenderghast has the word ghast in it ghast is a minecraft ghost like demon Useless facts aside this was an awesome start to a story keep posting

Good start! I hope to read the next chapter soon. (love triangle sweet)