that was really good! I've never been much of a romance writer, but I can tell this was good.

when are the bad guys going to show up and mess everything up between them? I know, I they're so cute together... but an epic plot twist would be fun.

Pleeeease continue writing! I think this is one of the best indy jones fanfics i've read! It's amazing and don't give up writing this story!

This story is amazing! I've read the whole thing in 3 hours! I love it! Please finish this amazing story and i hope you get heaps of reviews
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Too loooooooong!

Wow. This is really, really, good. It's too bad there isn't much of an Indy fanfiction base, but I'm glad this got written anyway. I'm definitely going to share this with my Indy bros. (: And wouldn't it be awesome to have Indiana Jones for a dad? Great concept!

Good job! Heres an idea, someone needs to die! Haha a plot where they all go to a barn where they find zombies! Well Maybe that's too Much like walking dead! Anyways good job! Excited for the next one! ;)

That was amazing! Short round coming in just made it sooo much better! Good job! Next one please!

Sweet! The family finally reunited! Can't wait for more action! I liked the char and mutt Convos. What If mutt did something that turned out to be bad and Indy didn't want char to be around him anymore? Just an idea. Good ending also!

Yes! Finally! That was good :)

Me Gusta!

More! More! "M" is Marion right? It has to be! Good job! I like the fights between Indy and Char

Awesome! Wonder who "M" may be... Can't wait for the next one!

Love the story!

Awesome! I'm not sure but i think mutt should be either related to only one of them or not related at all. :) more!

I think you should have mutt not related at cause i love the chemistry between him and char! I think they would make a cute couple!