Heh, that was pretty funny. :-p I like the part where he's giving Hagrid those mind-boggling directions, lol. Anyways, keep writing!

::dies laughing:: Oh man, you gotta continue this!

Quite amusing. I can't think of any other way to describe this...

Hi-friggin-larious! You couldn't have made it funnier! Big Brother, pies, Enemy at the Gates, idiotic independancy, puzzle irritation... jeez man, it was fantastic! Keep going! Oh, and the self-insertion is funny too.

"And a face that could make a grown man crack a fat"

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Wow...I think that makes me find SH even more disturbing...

HAHAHAHA! me and my friend call silent hill LOUD MOUNTAIN too! i thought i was the only one who thought it was funny! but you and me have the same sense of humor. hahahaha! oh, that's hilarious! loud mountain!

Ok, I've played Silent Hill and I really like it. I'm not flaming you or anything, it's just that...WTF?

Lol, that has got to be one of the craziest things I've ever read. Even worse than Imagine If You Will, which actually has at least something resembling a plot. I can't wait to read more of this. Even though I don't understand a single bit of it, it makes me laugh. . Write more!

Lol, you're right, I have absolutely no idea what just happened, but I laughed so I don't care! Hehehe, I like the running over the clown thing. Priceless. And Hagrid. He so rocks. XD Write on!

Cute. Hehehe. "She will be mourned, by someone." Eh, Cybil's all phophetic and stuff. Whoo.

Never have I heard the word "pie" in a single chapter more than in your story. I guess that's something to be proud of.

That was one of the funniest stories about Silent Hill I've read. But are you going to continue it?

Dah -thing is in the not bad and its got some good moments too all it needs now is da little more structure some more generelised related comedy and its all there on its way to the high dudes that publish books ppls ,guys , some-ppls, yeah well KooLieZ