| Reviews for I'll Be Your Shelter |
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MadameFanzel 2/10/13 . chapter 5*Finally catches up on most recent chapter* *apologizes for not reviewing as adamantly as I had planned* *appreciates the author's note shout-out* *should stop talking like this* Anyway, great chapter, as are all the others! I'm hoping maybe a review will be inspiring or whatever, but at any rate, great job so far! ;) |
AThousandAndOneNights 1/12/13 . chapter 5Love this so much! And that is literally all I can say :) |
KissTheBoy7 1/12/13 . chapter 5Hey, just dropping by to let you know I've caught up... This is definitely one of the better OC stories I've read. I like Abbi. I think it's going to be a challenge working in her characterization while she's in a state like this but you can do it. As for Roger, his dialogue is a little OOC sometimes- I don't think it has anything to do with the British though- but overall, everyone is in character, everything is progressing well. I like it, I applaud you for your efforts. Can't wait to see where it goes. Also Mark is my favorite so I'm ridiculously excited to see him in here. - Toni |
Gasell 1/11/13 . chapter 4"assuming anyone's still reading" Are you kidding me? I love this story :) |
claudiasofia 1/5/13 . chapter 1This story is amazing. |
Gasell 1/3/13 . chapter 2I still like it :) "I do wish I could see you again. Maybe sometime soon I will." That was so sad! One think that I though about, (in this fanfic as well as in the play/movie), is the fact that Roger used to shoot heroin and now it's a bit like he doesn't even think about it anymore. I know that you referenced to it in the first chapter, that he thought about using, but thought it was a betrayal to Mimi. That was very good, but still, I think that quitting drugs is hard, so if (or more likely when) he notices Abbi's habite, that it should be a bit hard on him. I'm not saying that you need to let him relapse or anything, but that you show the fact that he's a clean addict and it's still hard for him at times. I really like the way you portray Roger, and like your OC Abbi too. Looking forward to their relationship. :) And one more thing, where has Mark gone? |
LaurenLollipop 1997 1/2/13 . chapter 1I love reading your work please ppst more soon |
Gasell 1/2/13 . chapter 1I really like this story! :) |
MadameFanzel 1/1/13 . chapter 1Once again, I can't believe how long it took me to get around to reading this. BUT now that I have, I'm extremely intrigued. And I love the Bon Jovi wannabe line. :D Good job as usual! |
KissTheBoy7 1/1/13 . chapter 1Normally I really don't like Roger/OC stories but I think I have to make an exception. This was actually very in character and your OC isn't half bad either, which puts her in the top ten percent of OCs already. I'd love to see more of it but I think it could stand alone as well. Kudos. Toni |