mmm me like this one. Its different than most sotries as well. However im lost in all the names and people coming and going already in the story. Im sorry but that i will admit is my one complaint other than that i have nothing else and am in love with your writing style. Please keep writing.

Great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Once more you managed to keep my intrest and you also know when to stop telling a story to keep your readers interested. Thanks for continuing the story dear sir. I greatly appreciate it. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Dont stop there. What happens to her? If you cant tell by my first over reaction its really good and you most definatly grabbed and kept my attention.