Finally I'm getting to review this. Better late than never...

You know, I just realized that something about the pacing of Nine and Seven's argument and the gathering of the five lost dolls bothers me here. I guess it's because I see Seven's issue with this as logical: that she thinks Nine is just acting in denial of their deaths and doesn't want him to hinder himself or the rest of them from finding a future. I guess I just also see her as a stubborn character that wouldn't give into the idea that she could be wrong for a while. After all, she takes a lot issues with One in-canon, and never fully forgives him for what happened. And for nine gathering everyone together, then having Seven come in only one chapter after this conflict was established... I don't know. I guess I just remembered a little longer conflict on this.

Aside from that though, this thing is proofread perfectly and is nice to read again. I'm wondering if m Death and dying psychology class is taking a toll on my perspective.

*S. Snowflake

OOOOOOH IT FEELS LIKE I'M READING IT FOR THE FIRST TIME IT'S SO GOOD!

I MUST READ MORE! XD

*jumping all around excitedly*

My face: :'''''''''''''''''''''''D

Everything about this just makes me...MUGH! SO BEAUTIFUL!

I never really cried when watching 9, but reading about the events like this made me bawl!

JESUS I HAVE BEEN CRYING ALL DAY, CEL! What are you doing to my head! First, cry for the ending of Breaking Dawn (it's a beautiful ending, and I'm glad it's over). Then, SOB during Harry Potter 7 Part 2. Finally, bawl reading this! My tear-ducts are on fire!

Dumb, fickle 7. She'll never learn, you know. XD

Huzzah! 7 and the twins rejoined him! And he found everyone! I'm so happy with how this chapter turned out.

oh my GAWD! / It's been SO LONG since I read a 9 fanfic and you know what? I'm glad that when I did that it was yours. You see my inspiration for 9 was running dangerously low and for my writing partner too. But now that I read this; I'm back on track! So thanks!

STGLIJDLFDJFL Oh man I gotta read more, I GOTTA READ MORE!

My stomach dropped during the argument I swear, and my cheeks just flushed for whatever reason, and my heart just felt like it was on a rollercoaster!
AND I HAD A FEELING HE WAS GOING TO FIND HIM FIRST, I JUST KNEW IT!

I MUST READ MORE!

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Oh. Mah. Glob.

I'm speechless!

Thank you, for a little conflict. We need more of it in this fandom.

My heart sank a little, when he first saw something in the stream. I had my money on 6; but if I had paid any attention to Eternal Family, I would have known better.

He found 2! That's great! But 7 is pissed off at him, so... that's not great. But he found 2, so I'm happy. :D I can't wait to read more of this.

OMG, this exactly how I remembered it 2 years ago! Keep up the great work! :D :)

MORE! NOW! PLEEEEEASE!

Crikey! 9's determined to save the Lost ones! Even if it means leaving 7 and the twins. But how could 7 just reject him; say that to him?
You know, this chapter gives another comparison between 9 and Frodo; apart from sharing Elijah as a voice and having similar characters, both have to bear a heavy burden; it claws at them inside and it often makes them aggressive towards their friends. But they are both determined to accomplish their goal, no matter what obstacle they face.

Ooh, stuff's getting interesting! This is getting real good, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. And I liked the dialogue between 5 and 9, it sounded a lot like something they'd say in the movie.

TEEHEE! You know I was excited to see this!

That last line was killer. I got chills, myself. 8D