I loved your story, very mysterious and haunting. I just wondered, did the Evangelist want Doyle to leave Bodie behind because he didn't think Bodie was a soul worth saving? Or was it meant to be a test for Doyle? I'm probably over thinking it! It's a great story, thanks and hope there's more to come.

Oh I loved it! How nice to curl up with something different. Well done.

Intriguing and different, I really liked this story.

Fascinating ! Strange but oddly riveting. I did like it.