Nice! You should continue your a great writer!

That was fantastic.
A bit choppy at some parts, BUT REALLY COOL.

I love it! Maybe you could write about what happened after the bonus chapter? Anyway I very much like wgat you wrote :).

- Foreverblossoming

This is... so funny. So... I don't get what their competition was. Climbing, I think? I would like to see a drawing of Alek in a dress.