|Reviews for The 23th Phantom|
| Karou WindStalker 4/27/13 . chapter 2
I see a lot of promise behind the premise.
A few typos aside, the story is relatively well written.
| crazyjim87 4/11/13 . chapter 2
Look i would like to read the story but you need a beta reader to double check it and correct your mistakes.
| mark.fox.376 1/31/13 . chapter 2
First off i am really enjoying this story i must admit i am curious about how harry is going to find out about his heratige a suggestion maybe he goes to see hermione and notices her father has a tattoo on his wrist of the good mark
| Frustration 1/25/13 . chapter 2
That was really great, I'm looking forward to more.
| akasanta 1/21/13 . chapter 2
Enjoying your story. Look forward to the next update.
| JAIMOL 1/15/13 . chapter 2
A very promising start. I can not wait to know how the story goes.
| dysall75 1/14/13 . chapter 2
Why do you start with a new story and do not finish the others?
You also have not updated on any of your previous stories.
I am sorry if it sounds like I am complaining too much but I like this story and the others.
I know that you might be busy but could you at least add another chapter to this story and the one with Harry as Brave Starr's son?
| ILoveGeorgeEads 1/14/13 . chapter 2
i loved loved loved was great.i can't wait for more.
| Alalaya2 1/13/13 . chapter 1
if that is military time it would be pm not am 13:00 is 1:00 pm if its a single digit up until 12 it's am after 12 its pm. thought you wanted to know ether then that love the story so far good work.
| JannaKalderash 1/13/13 . chapter 2
I am soooooo intrigued by this little ditty. I can't wait until stuff is revealed!