Interesting beginning.
I see a lot of promise behind the premise.
A few typos aside, the story is relatively well written.

Look i would like to read the story but you need a beta reader to double check it and correct your mistakes.

First off i am really enjoying this story i must admit i am curious about how harry is going to find out about his heratige a suggestion maybe he goes to see hermione and notices her father has a tattoo on his wrist of the good mark

That was really great, I'm looking forward to more.

Enjoying your story. Look forward to the next update.

Cheers! :D

A very promising start. I can not wait to know how the story goes.

Why do you start with a new story and do not finish the others?
You also have not updated on any of your previous stories.
I am sorry if it sounds like I am complaining too much but I like this story and the others.
I know that you might be busy but could you at least add another chapter to this story and the one with Harry as Brave Starr's son?
Thank you.

i loved loved loved was great.i can't wait for more.

if that is military time it would be pm not am 13:00 is 1:00 pm if its a single digit up until 12 it's am after 12 its pm. thought you wanted to know ether then that love the story so far good work.

I am soooooo intrigued by this little ditty. I can't wait until stuff is revealed!