oh god Deja vu O.o

I love this story so far. Keep up the good work :)

norman's a smart ass :) update soon-ish must read more

one word... love

I suggest a beta. Just saying.

Ok, so, your grammer needs A LOT of work. Half the time I could not understand what they were saying. You have "hear" which you "hear" things and "here" which I'm "here" "writing" a review.
I'm sorry if I seem like an ass hole, but the grammer is really important.

Update. Update. Update. Update. Update. Update. Continue pleassssssseeeeeeee! Love the story. :D

You need to work on your spelling and word sound-a-likes.
" its not wright" should be "it's not right," and " I'm hear if you need anything k" should be "I'm here if you need anything, okay?"

Remember to press enter after one character stops speaking and another begins. A big bunched up paragraph like this chapter is annoying to look at.

Also, try not to make things too cheesy. You want a good well done love story, not a cliche fanfiction I can find anywhere.

so cute!
please, continue your fic, i really like it. its a pretty good secuel of the movie.
hope to read the next cap soon, see you, send hugs and good vibrations ;D

Do you speak English fluently, or do you have dyslexia? Anyways, I love this story! Please keep writing darling!

R u gud english, my friend?
Cuz its weird...but amazing!
So simple yet interesting..
Great job! Hope 4 new chaps 2 come out!
Bye...4 now...

hay me hows it going i'll be reviewing my self I bet you thought no one would do such a thing but I did lol

I'm samped my self oups