This was sooooo Good! I'm digging the prose here! And fast update Loving it!

Great! Waiting for the next update

Hilarious...I love humor and coupled with RXJ...Delicious! Update soon

Nice start...I have to admit Romeo and Juliet is one of my favorite stories

I recommend you rewrite this ..
There're all commas and theres only ONE dot.
Which is damn annoying cause that's basically one more long line.