Oh, me too. Me too! For some reason I expected a big fandom, and now there is a total of nineteen works on the entire freaking web, seven of which belong to me.

This is lovely! The language is quite vivid, and the pairing doesn't seem too crack.

I have a personal dislike for the usage of most of the nouns as substitutes for character names; it was throwing me off slightly. "The older male", "the younger man" et c. just make texts sound like a biology textbook.

Also a semi-relevant remark: I'm lol'ing at your nickname :D