Beautiful! I love how rory had Emily catch the swan.

I liked how you kept it real at the end. Rory needed to hear that. It's not all about her. Look! You made me a Jess fan :)

Wow. You made Logan the good guy but in a realistic way.

This story just got crazy exciting. I love it! I also love how you had miss patty pulled into the story line.

What a delightful ride. Very much enjoyed it.

This was a very cute ending! i loved it! please do more fics because i love your writing and this universe!

awwwwwwwwww 3 3 *wipes away a tear*

awwwwww 3 3 3! i love the cufflink time warp. lol thats just so jess

YAY! This is good :) Perfect way to show jess that she means business :)

So great. Your ability to write both Jess and Rory is excellent. I particularly like the parts from Jess' past that you've created. Whenever I see an update to this, I know my heart's going to ache. Thank goodness it looks like there migh be a happy ending?!

This could have gone horribly, honestly, the plot twists and turns could have seemed ridiculous. But your writing was so spectacular and you made it work so well that it is one of the best fanfictions I've read in a long time and the highlight of my day is seeing if there's a new chapter because I need to know what happens next. Thank you so much.

aww poor jess! though i was cracking up with the whole scene of jess getting ready! the whole Stranger Danger thing! i had tears coming out of my eyes i was laughing so hard

Hahaha oh that was funny. I love Jess and lorelais relationship :)

RE: Your note at the end of Chapter 16. I like the Tristan you've developed here. You've developed him and matured him in a believable way. It makes him an interesting multidimentional character. Enjoying the story very much.

3 tristan. and finally rory is getting her head on right