Wonderful! are there more?

The storie unfolds!

its starting to get more interesting. well done

Uhuh. So, um, what exactly was that guy talking abuot at the end? If you're not planning a sequel, you might want to explain that a little better.

Like it. :) very good but what's the end mean. Is like an evil guy or something trying to trick her? I've probably read the end wrong but it's good anyway

good! good! good! luv it! )

Great series! You've defiantely got me interested! Can't wait for more!