There should have been more Zim x Gaz, since it's a one shot.
Without it, the story just lacks something (that's what it lacks)

This is such a great oneshot! Would you mind if I made a little fancomic of this? I will credit you of course!

This oneshot was great! I love ZaGr, and this was just a great portrayal of how you would actually expect their relationship to be like! Great job!

Awh I wanna know what happens :(

*gasp* this is a one shot!? Awwww! Oh well, I loved this story and I know what you mean about more time for other things other than writing (I have a fanfic account too, but I'm too lazy to log in). Loved the story!

I liked this!

Very in character. You grasped every detail beautifully.