Dudde. So i think the part when Haku and Chihiro kissed was kind of rushed and inexplicable. You should make it fluffier and more romantic! Not just a random kiss out of the blue. Showcase Haku's reaction too!
Kkbyee(Hehehe that rhymed)

Thing first this A/N at the beginning scared the hell out of me! Did Haku while talking to Chihiro about his past told her he kissed his sister? How on earth did Sakura fell for her little brother in less than a minute ? Did she know that eventually she would get married to Haku ? Why does Haku's father call him Haku while his real name is KOhaku ? Also what will he do to protect Chihiro for his now crazy psychotic sisters ?

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Awwwwwwwwwwww it's soooooo good just can't wait for more hurry up and update or else or else even I don't know what I'll do !:-P
And yay finally a kiss awwwwwwwwwwww soooooo cute, next up the confession I hope . Chihiro's first but sadly Haku's second ...

I've been wondering what would Haku do if he had to choose between Sakura and Chihiro ? Who would he choose between? Well there is no way he would give up Chihiro but a sister and first love it's a sister and first love no matter what...

Why Haku hasn't quit being Yubaba's employee ? And how did Haku's Sister died? lt's a great story keep updating. l want more and l can't wait to read more Haku-Chihiro moments ...:-) ;-)

Hahahahahahaha FINALLY! They kissed!

nice

Genie ._. I think Mr Boiler man's name is spelled with a "ka" not a "ko" and you made a few grammatical errors. Overall, YOU'RE SO AMAZING cya at school

Ha ha! It's so true! I look forward to the next chapter. :3

I like the dw elopement so far! And I can't wait to find out what's so special about Chihiro that she would be targeted.

Hahahaha Haku is embarrassed!

YES! When you mentioned that she wasn't much of an athlete I was like NOOOO she not like a weak loser is she!? But then BAM! She was AWESOME and Won Like EVERYTHING AND I WAS SO HAPPY! Cause I'm an athlete. GREAT CHAPTER! You better update fast or I swear ill KILL YOU! Hahaha!

NICE! :3

Nices

My eyes definitely widened to practically plate size when I read that the twins were Haku's sisters. I wasn't expecting that plot twist. LOL. Haku is definitely to innocent to look at Chihiro as Kamajii is redressing her wound. But that is what I love about Haku's character. Innocent and honorable. XD. Definitely keep up the good work, you are so totally a good writer.

I love your story so far, but there is the slight issue of Yuuko being the name of Chihiro's mother. Other than that, no complaints. Keep it up!

Ohhhhh that's why they didn't kill Chihiro!