LOVE IT! ;) PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON! U HAVEN'T UPDATED IN AWHILE, AND I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!

A nice start. :D Keep it up!

loved it minatu-chan can you please update I'm waiting for your next chapter dying to see what will happen next

I think you should write more... But then again I know how u fell if u don't know what to write next cuz Im lost with my own story too! But your is pretty good! I liked it

Me likie! I've only just recently started watching Hiiro no Kakera and I find quite interesting... I personally might go for Ryou, because we'd balance each other out. I've heard and done some research on him and we seem to be a bit of opposites. He's a bad-boy, I'm a good-girl. My English Teacher called me perfect yesterday when we were typing an important paper. Yeah, well, awesome story! Can't wait for more!

neeMinatu-chan sensei please update, it is a very interesting story.I can't wait for your update(0w0)

Omg it's genious! I can't wait intikken the next chapter!

I really liked it. I hope you have a slow build plot and update:D

cute! can't wait! :D

Wow, this is rather interesting, update soon? Please? :3

OMG! I really like it! Mahiro is my favorite character from Hiiro no Kakera! Please continue to write more and update soon! Great Job! :D