Ahh, poor Deryn! This is a very interesting story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

(Lol. Und we are... the Hessenheffers!)

hah xD I love how you used Shake It Up charries

YAY! I almost DIED because of the wait. POST SOOOOOOOOOON!

Brilliante as ever before. Gotta love that first part. Ah, newkirk. And ALEK IS COMING! FLEE TO THE HILLS!

Great but need to update

I love this story so much!

Loved it! Next chapter, s'il vous plait!

Lovely as always, dear. And I said hi? Since when?! *looks around suspiciously*

Anywho, brilliant, don't eat any frogs and see you tommorow.

Thanks or mentioning me D Also, I love the new chapter

NEWKIRK U R AWESOME BUT U R MAKING THINGS SO CONPLICATED SOMEBODY IS GOING TO EXPLODE!
I loved this chappy! Update pls?

I love this! Write quickly, please! :)

You have a great start to your story! It's great! I really like your two chapters, even though they are kinda short... :( please update soon. I would be really appreciative of that!
Thanks!
-Peace

Again, I don't know if I reviewed, so just saying hi.

Awesome! Oh, you know Bramblepool? Can you please tell her Rose Fowl is her biggest fan? And that she's an amazing writer, just like you? Thanks!

I am really looking forward to the next chapter, please keep writing! My only criticism is to make the chapters longer because I want to read more of it! Haha