i never thought about this posibility...to train your best friend to take your place in the games...interesting idea, looking forward to read more

K

I was not expecting it to go this deep! You tied it all back in with the 74th Hunger Games, and this is when it starts.

Amazing story or should I say novel , because this is well over 50,000 words.

I loved your story and I can't wait to start reading Mentor!

These last few chapters seem to tie it all up!

I'm loving the whole Cato lineage, and Mellark , I find it really unique that you did it the way you did.

I feel bad for Ludo, can't believed his mom died.

One more chapter :(

Ludo's finally going back to District 4, he's finally going to be home.

I'm sad that this story is coming to an end.

I want to commend you on the outstanding backstories, like how you connect the past victors. I don't think people realize how hard that is.

Another awesome chapter!

This was by far the funniest chapter. I also think it's really well written!

I really like that you incorporated other victors into this seen, it was really entertaining.

Cato's grandfather seems legit.

Reading this chapter makes me feel sorry for Quintus...

Poor Maddie, well at least she want have suffer anymore, or stress about her family.

I hope that Ludo gives some of his winnings to Maddies family, so they won't starve.

Ludo Congratulations!

You survived the arena!

I like the flashback thing you did about each tribute.

Well Remora places fourth, slain by Maddie. I'm not really bothered by her death actually, I fill she was more of a background character than anything else. I feel that Remora never stood chance from the moment she volunteered for the games. I knew she would never become victor, and I feel that in the end, she knew this too.

Quintus, I gained respect for you, but I also hated you for killing Maddie and Robin. I feel your not the villain in the story, because your only doing what you've been trained to do. Quintus only kills, because that's the only instructions his parents have invested in him. Its a pity that he missed out on living because he was to busy training, and now that he's dying, he will have never actually lived.

Well Robin is dead, I'm a little said but I predicted he would die next. I figured once he died the playing fields would be even.

I liked this chapter, especially the conversation between Quintus and Ludo. It was funny yet thrilling. I was like what's going to happen. Someone make a move already.

The anticipation is killing me.

I'm going to assume that Quintus is Cato's older brother.

I'm a tad bit confused with this next chapter, I expected to see a death recap after the mutts, because it turned to night.

Well another chapter down! and only five tributes left!

Sadly, I assumed that Pearl would be the first Career to die. I gained respect for Pearl throughout the story, and I understood why she did the things she did. In the end I pitied her more than I hated her.

I'm going to miss Sophia. She was a humble and caring character, reminds me of Peeta.

So someone died before Sophia...but who?

This had to be my favorite chapter so far! The dialogue between Sophia and Ludo as she died made the hair on my arm stand.

Excellent Chapter!

Alright so I was not expecting it to be the boy from 6 and the girl from 5. I can't believe the boy wounded Ludo, bet at least Sophia was there to save him.

I really liked this chapter so much that I'm kind of speechless.

The only suggestion I would give is make a note as to when you kill off a tribute haha because you like to kill them twice. :)

Amazing writing and the whole delusional dialogue was funny, it made me laugh.

That was unexpected.

I wasn't expecting Remora and Pearl to be so, defeated. They're Careers for a reason, stop your crying and kill Quintus while he slumbers.

I have a feeling a Career is about to die.

Well District 10 is out too. That's funny that the boy found his knives, it tells you that the tributes do cross the same paths.

Finally the Alliance breaks, I'm going to "assume" that when the two alliance meet that there will be more than one cannon sounding.

Another amazing chapter!

I hope Robin doesn't let the power go to his head like Quintus did.

You know what they say, "Power and Enemies go hand in hand."

Well so far District 3,9,and 11 are out of the race.

Who just died? :/

Well Ludo just got deep, real deep. I'm wondering how this is going to end.

O' how romance in the games sucks for those who seek it.