Awesome! I liked how you included the right setlist. Some people disregard the details and write it wrong, or if they don't know something, they don't research it. Anywho, I loved it! Keep up the good work!

Jeeze what a horrible mother. I'm glad Sarah's getting off to the States though. And what happened to the relationship Paul and Sarah had earlier on? I think Paul needs to rekindle that.

That was an interesting bit at the end! I like it so far, keep it up!

Yay! Ringo! thanks for updating so soon!

Wow, cool chapie! Can't wait to see what happens now that they have met Brian.

Wow I love the meeting with john! and The whole flash to 1980 had a lot of feeling in it! update soon!

You characterise the other Beatles perfectly! Please update soon!

I like her working for eppy! But taking the record... update soon!

Wow really good chapter! She's quite the charmer herself.
I love when they are able to have heady to heady talks relieving all the stress that has built up. Great work!

This is soooooooo awesome. I ADORE THIS STORY! write more soon!

A nice little chapter, i do hope you keep it up. but i understand how busy things can get.
Paul is really the charmer. i think it will turn out well. Great job!

"When're you free to take some tea with me? Lovely Sarah, meter maid!" Haha, I like it! I can't wait to see her character develope even further.

Hmm interesting start. I will be waiting to see how it turns out. is the record store Eppy's?

I'm sure it will turn out fine! I don't mean for this to sound rude at all, but it's my opinion that writing for reviews is no way to write. You write to please yourself, you write to please the consumers, but don't write for a profit. If you are, please don't put it in your summary so I don't have to know. Thanks. On another note, I believe this story could have great potential and you should update soon!

Oh my gigs I love this! Write more soon!