I'm afaid I wasn't able to follow the storyline. :(

Maybe you should've kept things sorted so that it would be easier to keep track of, I dunno. Maybe I'm just still hungover. xD

wtf? buffy and willow? i like some of your storys but NONONONONO

Oh wow. This is really great! When it started so dark, I was worried, but what a great turn-around! But I'm telling you right now, this needs a sequel! I want to know what happens next, and you've got so much potential going. Just something to think on.

Happy Writing!

If you're going to write a B/W slash story, put it in the damn summary that it's a B/W slash story.

I have no objection to slash in general, but B/W is not *my* preference - thanks for wasting my time reading the beginning of your story!