Reviews for Warrior's Pride

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Zelgadis55 2004-07-18 ch 1,	abusegrin Nothing like a bit of toilet humor to brighten one's day!
Chipolata 2003-10-01 ch 1,	abuseHa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha... ooh...
chibitrunk 2003-08-31 ch 1,	abuseLoL! I just finished reading a Warrior's Angst and now I found this. You really have a nice way with your story-telling. I love how you torture the proud Saiyajin prince with the most trivial daily challenge in both fics. And I love how you portrayed Vegeta. Keep up the good work!
Dreamwraith 2003-04-23 ch 1,	abuseI must say that this was THE funniest "short story" I have ever read in my entire life. I can only imagine what's going to happen to Goku when it's his turn to use the bathroom. Great job!
Sawnya 2003-03-13 ch 1,	abuseHAHAHAHA! Funny! I can see it too, and I like the subtle way you wrote about Vegeta's agony, hehhehheh!
Pudgoose 2003-01-13 ch 1,	abuseOH MAN! Laughs like crazy That was.... was.... @@;; As much as it feels odd to admit, that was a real worth-my-while read! LOL!!! Grins and snickers "Vejita aimed carefully." O_O My my my... such a twisted statement for such an honorable guy...... Laughs I LOVE IT! XD Too funny, Moose, too funny! And I really love the irony in the title! ^___^ Perfect! Lovie dovies! ~Pudgoose
Stef-chan 2003-01-03 ch 1,	abuseLOL!! And I wonder why I never picked up your work before!! This has got to be one of the shortest fics I've ever read in my life, and yet it still has the quality of the longer fanfictions. You had me sitting at the edge of my seat as I read the first few paragraphs, because I was very certain that this was some sort of a battle scene between Vegeta and an opponent! Lol!! I guess the very first sentence, "Vejita aimed carefully.", just depicted that assumption into my head. Grins By the time I finished, I kind of sat there and wondered, "...Wait...What?!" Lol! Hilarious! Though this is a short humor fic, you've had some great use of language and imagery and all those literary terms that I learn in English class. ^_^ I hope you're VERY much proud of how you write because I swear it's enviable. (Makes me wonder how much I've got to work on my writing... Sigh -_-;) And with English being your second language, too! @_@; I'm definately going to pick up your other work as time goes by, and I'll probably also read your non-DBZ stories as well, just for the heck of it. In the mean time, I think I'll file this onto my Favorite Stories section, because I'm sure other passer-bys will enjoy it as much as I did!! :) ~ Stef-chan
Leia 2002-10-09 ch 1,	abuseEwww ... that was gross. I don't wanna' think about yucky ol' bus toilets!!!! Well. Now that I've been reduced to the mentality of my four-year-old cousin ... laughs That was funny, actually. Vegeta should have levitated - nobody would've noticed! As for Goku ... he'd probably just go out the window or the back door or something. He never seemed to be shy of 'relieving himself' in public ... yuck. laughs ~Leia
soyamiso 2002-09-26 ch 1,	abuseHah! Good one. Never experienced that because the stench from that tiny box usually knocked me out halfway there.
Angelfish369 2002-09-07 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was so weird! I had no clue what's going on until the end, but your story was probably intended to be that way. Nice, and funny.
Mizuwari1986 2002-09-06 ch 1,	abuseThis was funny, in an odd way^_^
FloralBlackMoon 2002-09-01 ch 1,	abuseHi Lee, my god that was so funny! LOL, I thought he was doing a sport of some sort. But when you revealed he was using the bathroom, LOL, this was funny.
Anime-Goddess2 2002-08-04 ch 1,	abuseLOL!!! very cute! Way to go Vegeta! Very funny story. It had quality not quantity. ;)
Tenshi Sasher 2002-08-03 ch 1,	abuseOh My gosh!!! That was SO HILARIOUS!! It reminds me of my own expierence while I was on a choir tour last summer! this is SO FUNNY! It really isn't what it seems to be! Three big thumbs up! I forgot to mention I have three arms,lol! Great job, Birgit! God bless! Love, Tenshi
SerenityZero 2002-08-02 ch 1,	abuseHAHAHA tell me that wasn't just a story about Vegeta trying to go to the bathroom on a moving bus? ROTFLMFAO

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