Reviews for A Rose Among the Thorns
Ser Orange 8/14/02 . chapter 4
MAN THAT WAS GREAT! _ write more more more! lol ;)
just a reader 8/14/02 . chapter 4
THIS GREAT! ad it's good of you to look stuff up. it makes the story sound better and more whole. Trust me as a writer it makes a diffrence. THe fic is great! i didn't review the other cahpters cuz they sounded so familer. But this ochapter made the diffrence. Heero's emotions couldn't have been better written. Your doing great and i can't wait for the rest!
Prinder 8/14/02 . chapter 4
Oh my gawd! *crying for Heero* it's just so UNFAIR! the one thing that he ever wanted in life was just ripped away from him by a guy who has everything! Relena was swept off her feet by the perfect man, what is the perfect soldier going to do?

Prinder
Lost One 8/14/02 . chapter 4
Man, this is gonna be an awesome story! I'm so excited. Being a huge 1xR fan I want this story to conttinue so that we can see them together. Hmmm...I wonder if this Alex is gonna turn out to be a bad guy...
apol 8/14/02 . chapter 4
WOAH! yuy is really mad from jealousy! _
butterflygirl 8/14/02 . chapter 4
Yay!

Sanc can be spelled many different ways for different symbolism thingies. Cinq for the numbering system; Sank for the fact that it became a 'sunken' kingdom; and i forget the other one...

Anyway, keep going!
Tenoko 8/14/02 . chapter 4
I am loving this fic! PLease continnue! I love the way that Heero is so well in character, and I love the way Relena and Alex are with ech other, but it seems too good to be true. Like he's a Prince Charming and everything with that white horse. Poor Heero! *sobs unccontrollably for Heero* Have to watch the girl he loves kiss another man! Heero get you butt in the game! Make a move. Ask her out, fake n assasination just so you can save her life, something! Tell her you care, kiss her, show up on her balcony with a red rose bud in partial bloom! I know romance and sap aren't your style but do something before you loose her! Well, I'm going to shutup now, but I just wanted you to know that this is a good-great fic!

*Tenoko*
sweetangel 8/13/02 . chapter 4
great job on this story...poor heero. I do like this alex guy. I just now saw this story so hopefully this explains why i'm saying all this after chapter 4 instead of reviewing each chapter like i'll do from now on. Anyways good luck and get the next chapter out soon. :)
AyanamiChan 8/13/02 . chapter 4
I really, really like this! Write more! And, Sanc, Sank, Cinq, it's all good. All of those spellings (and a few others) are universally accepted, and no one will complain. However, if you wish to be exact, I believe it's Cinq. Cinq is the number 5 (I think) in French, and we all know how important numbers are un Gundam. You don't really need to go back and change it, because no one really cares which spelling you use. Just be careful not to mix the spellings in the story. It's weird to have it Sanc then Cinq in the same story. Anyway... Jealous Heero! _ _ (Amazing, what I get happy about...) So, keep on writing! I'll keep on reading and reviewing! *hugs*
aemaeth 8/13/02 . chapter 4
*is happy* NEW CHAPPIE! YAY! *chokes* No-Relena-don't! *cries and pats poor Heero on the back* It doesn't matter, I still love you! *grin* Well...wonderfully written as always. You have me on the edge of my seat; write more soon!
aemaeth 8/12/02 . chapter 3
*preforms several very violent rounds of fancy kicks on Alex until he is knocked sufficiently unconscious, then goes fuming after Heero* No, no...jk...but Hee-chan? Where is he? She can't marry the prince! *cries* Very well-written; the narrative is captivating and discriptive, and your use of grammer admirable. I love it already. In fact...*adds to favourites list* Now, update! And Heero better be in the next chapter or I'll kill him!
Wing 8/12/02 . chapter 3
That was a really good start...I can't believe Heero would give her such a special ring...I guess I didn't see it in him...sorry about underestimating Heero...ha. Well, the prince is charming and nice enough, he's not pushy...but i am worried about that Donavon dude. What will happen between Relena, Alex, Donavon and Heero? Like I know you're going to talk about what Heero's been doing all these years...how does he expect to win her over compared to a charming prince? Haha...I'd like to read more so gambatte! From the ever so *sweet* and *kawaii*Wing
apol 8/10/02 . chapter 3
ooohh! handsome, eh? but is still like relena with heero! can i have the prince _

heero: *swats the pan on apol's head*

oroooooooo...
selenayuy 8/10/02 . chapter 3
Hi, I just wanted to say that this has got to be one of the BEST stories i have EVER read! I really want to see heero come in all of a sudden and stop the wedding or something(i'm sorry but i am very supportive of heero and relena gettin together).

Anyways, it's a great story!

Keep writtin'!
JK 8/10/02 . chapter 3
This is such a great story! You gotta keep those chapters coming. I'll be watching you! not in some crazy, stalking type of way... hehe GREAT JOB _
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