Wow!

Reading your story is such a pleasure,please update soon ! :)

I can't wait for the next chapter(s) ! :D

Just some more comments. :) Q is written so wonderfully. I love this part: "Armus didn't kill Tasha...The Romulans didn't kill Tasha...You killed Tasha, self-righteous Guinan. And by doing that you've killed the entire universe..." Best. Line. Ever. Take that Guinan! Q tells it like it is. lol. I also love when he's watching everyone from the ceiling. And aw...it's nice that Beverly is watching over Tasha and worried about her nightmare. You left a really good cliffhanger with this one. 2 years later and I'm still wanting to know what happens. :)

I have recently re-read this story and I'm hooked again! It was always one of my favorites. Always wanted to know how it would end.

This is a very interesting story so far. You said in your profile that you would update if there was enough reader intrest. Well I am interested enough to count as ten people.

I didn't find this chapter too rushed, and the characterizations are fine. I like Beverly's impatience, and Q's infuriating attitude. Nicely done! When you have the opoortunity to post more, I'll be happy to read more!

I'm glad that you've moved the story along. It does feel less flushed out that your previous chapters--but I am glad to see where it is going. Thanks for continuing to work on it. It's a great premise and you write Q very well. Most of the crew reactions are very true to character. Keep up the good work!

Q RULES!
I like the idea of Q being on probation and doing galactic community service!
Great cliffhanger!

So far so good. Big Yar fan. I like this one curious to see what happans.

This is a fabulous story. It's really well written and well paced. Your characterization is excellent. Keep up the good work.

This is a fabulous story. It's really well written and well paced. Your characterization is excellent. Keep up the good work.

Well done, really really good story so far!

I love the interaction between Guinan and Q: you've written it so spot on that the reader can 'hear' their voices, and you've done justice to an intriguing relationship.

More please!

Laura

Great writing. Keep going.

Great writing. Keep going.

good

Please continue. This sounds real good!