This really entertaining and fun to read. You're goin along the same lines I am for writing my own IS fanfic. can't wait to see more!

Your fanfic is getting better and better with every chapter, so keep up the good work. And the technique Zeus Blade is pretty cool if I say so my self. I also like how Luke usualy is in the middle of Honne and her friends, but I don't have to worry because they are harmless and are friendly so nothing bad will happen to him. Kepp up the good work.

great stuff my friend, the new chapters are nice especially the last one, the fight scenes are also good though a bit short but that's just me mostly,keep up the great work

I've now read all of what you've done so far and the only word i can use to describe it is EPIC. Can't wait for the next chapters.

Dude, spotted 2 minor spelling mistakes in this chapter, but apart from that ITS F*CKING BRILLIANT!
love your variation of vocabulary and i can really feel the accents of charlotte, Laura and Cecilia.
I'll be reading and waiting for more.

Good chapter like the others, and I'm looking forward to the next. I reread the previouse 7 chapters and notice changes in this fic. I spoted where you fixed the error to keep Chifuyu more in character and found out who this "Angel" guy is.

I really don't like writing the accent parts it's just that it was complicated to write it on.

Hmm, another 3rd pilot? Is 2 enough? Never mind. I will see how it goes.

Let's try to add in the accent.

"Hello, my name is Luke Lincoln, and it's nice to meet you"

would be

"'ello, my nem is Luke Leincoln, and it's naice to met ya"

Nice. Thanks for the update, anyway..

I only started reading this, but I must say that you did a good job. The content is surprising easy to follow. Short yet simple. I am looking forward to the other chapters.

Good chapter. But there is a slight problem. You made Chifuyu a little ooc, nothing major but when she adresses her students she just says their surname. Here's an example instead of " " it's "Richardson" but other than than that it's a good fanfic so far. I'm just trying to help with constructive criticism.

good chapter as usual but can i ask you a question about the Laura's reaction to Morgan is a bit exaggerated since she used to like Ichika or did Ichika choose Houki as his girlfriend?

Good work.

But it get... weird at some point, inconsistency.
"One extraordinary feature that Morgan had was his intellect." after read this sentence i though "So this guy is good with his brain. Extraordinary after all". But "He possessed above-average intelligence, and did very well on tests in particular." above-average? Just above-average? how about genius lever? Extraordinary for above-average seems weird.

And "He had always thought that machines were fascinating; especially complex things like mechs." So he has interested in robot but he could not recognize a IS in the facility being using for testing students. And he has extraordinary intellect so he should connect "the multi-purpose building where the tests were held" to "Yes. Go into the next room and suit up" to "a strange metal suit" to "Infinite Stratos" to "I'm male and i can pilot an Infinite Stratos." When he moving around in that "strange metal suit". He act like an airhead school girl while possessed extraordinary intellect?

That's the weird part.

Ichika know well what Infinite Stratos is when he saw one, his sis piloted one. But for "He had always thought that machines were fascinating; especially complex things like mechs." and he's living in the world of female human can pilot super exoskeleton suit call IS but he cannot tell the "strange metal suit" is a Infinite Stratos even when he was in one? His extraordinary intellect brain is useless more than Ichika.

Great chapter as usual! nice MorganxCharlotte fluff scene ( that's what they call it,right?)hope for more & good luck

very nice nearly flawless grammar & great detail definitely favorite in my book. keep up the good work & thanks for the fast updates