This is turning into a really good fic so far. I hope to read more. Keep up the good work!

Damn, Clausy is so clever.

I like. I want.

I want more pls.

I don't know why, but this chapter had me laughing like crazy XD

LAWL! So freaking funny! Love this new chapter! Claus' a clever boy isn't he? I am soo gonna be waiting for the next chapter! Update soon

I love this story sooooo much! I really hope this get updated soon!

OOOOOOOH THIS STORY IS GETTING INTENSE NOW! *shot* lol sorry, I still like it though. The way you portray Paula here isn't making me hate her either, so I have to say thank you for that. I hate how we have to save her twice in EarthBound, even when she proves she can handle the situation herself and wipe out a ton of enemies at once. T_T That's why Jeff is my (second) favorite of the chosen four. Here though she seems to be completely normal like Ness, or at least form what I've seen. This'll be interesting.

I'm sensing a luuuuuuv triangle! That I'm for once okay with! (they get cliche and boring after awhile)

Also I read your other stories, they're very random. It was hard not to laugh, but I'm pretty sure my parents overheard me cause they were really loud laughs no matter how much I tried to hide 'em. The crack stories are pretty epic, I'm sad to see you had to put one on haitus but I'm sure it's very painful for you too (that switch one was so epic though)! I'm loving your chapters, and I'm glad you gave us more after your long departure, but I could also just be greedy...

Anyways yeah, glad to have you back!

This story is awesome. Can't wait for more!

I have a feeling Paula is a yandere.

shealwaysis/getsshot

But yes, Claus. I SEE YOU CLAUS.

awaiting Ch6

DON'T BE A CHEATER. D: Also, when you said he "looks so gay" did you mean homosexual, or happy? I have a feeling it was the former. Stop being offensive! Other than that, when you cap-locked "Oh my god", it looked weird. A bit silly, really. Will you look into that?

Other than the aforementioned, okay chapter. It was definitely filler (with some plot), but there's something missing.

I don't think there were any errors, but you might want to check.

Sorry it I seemed rude,
An Unknown girl from Johto :3

... It's difficult to find author's that update their stories like this... bwahahahaha I hope you know what this means, I'm going to have to check out your profile now. If I like your other stories then I'm going to announce the stalking lawlz... next time. *too lazy now plus it's really late and I has work*

Either way this story is making me laugh, so I'm really hoping that no one heard me. *shifty eyes* The chase in the dance hall was pretty epic, I could just envision it lookling like a catastrophe afterwards while Victor attempts to be calm. Also, Lisa reminds me of that one NPC in Mother 3, mostly because of her name but... now I really want to play it again. ;_; Why did my files have to get erased?

Oh well, teh point is good job once more! I'm wondering how exactly Ness is going to react to Paula though... (and when will Nesu(Ness) and Kurausu(Claus) meet again? ?o?)

Oh...poor Ness.

...And Princess of Polestar? hale no. HALE NO.

WhereistheNessXClaus

To be honest, at first I thought this wasn't going to be much of an interesting story. But then I read this 2nd chapter and now...

OMG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! 3 The character development and family issues here are making me hungry for moar! AND I LOVE THE LENGTHY CHAPTERS! YUSH! *shot*

Okay lol sorry, but really why aren't there more reviews 'n stuff? Do you know how long it takes one to find a Ness X Claus/ Claus X Ness/ whatever story? I just love these two together because they seem like such a hilarious pair of similar (sp?) personalities that they're just too unpredictable... if that makes sense. lawlz

So yeah, moral of the story is that this is a good story and I seem hyper (re-reading what I wrote here).

*Perks up* Firewood, you say? Firewood fire...I like your suggestion. I wonder if Duster really doesn't know where Nessie is, or if he's in on a plan for him to live a normal life for a bit.

Considering the...medieval-esque of the story...I'm very intrigued for how this will turn out.

Especially NessXClaus. Ohhh oh boy.