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Reviews for: Harry Potter and The Danger Within
Padawan Jan-AQ 12/3/03 . chapter 1
oh wow... this is new. Please update it soon! Does Harry actually like Dudley?
JustKidding 7/9/03 . chapter 1
I hope you update soon. I was thinking of making Dudley a wizard my self in my story Summer Surprises. (note how Marge went flying ou t of the window before Harry could reach his wand? ssh, don't tell anyone.) I think this will be the first of its kind. I would like to see Dudley in Hogwarts. I wonder what house he would be in?
ShinningStar 8/16/02 . chapter 1
Hey, this is a good chapter and I like it. Why don't you put chapter 2 so I could know what happens next, plz. I like how Dudley finds out he really was a wizard and now he won't bugs Harry, cool. You are very smart and I really am dieng to find out what Dudley's parents will do when they finds out that their son is a wizrd, ha ha ha. I hope you put some action on your other chapters and more funny too. I hope you put the guys play funny jokes to Malfroy or maybe he finds something about his father and then he could be nice to Harry and the guys. Well, good luck. I have a stories that I will put on the computer and 3 of them are about Star Wars and 4 of them are about Harry Potter. I hope you like them and review thwm. Bye, and I will tell people to review you story because is the boom.
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