*Yawn* Booorrring! Takari is so old. It's getting boring now! Hope Kari gets a slap in the face for not getting the milk. She is such a shit daughter. I'd slap her if she were mine and I'd forbid her to see tk. Stupid little goody goody brats!

So cute...

I loved the part of the phones being busy...

Really Great fic! Very Kawaii! The kiss was a little unexpected but I liked it! Hikari's mom will probably understand why she didn't buy the milk. Really great fic and I liked the song!

Owh, man! This story is so sweet! TK and Kari, missing each other... I was a little worried when it comes to the part that both couldn't contact each other using the phone...hah..

BUt this is such a sweet story! Love it!

*TAKARI FOREVA!*

Oh, she didn't buy the milk... yeah that was the most important thing everyone was wondering at the end of this fic. .;;;; Whatever. Love this song SCLUB7Rules and so do TK and Kari so keep it up! Ja ne! _

Wow. That was beutiful. I'm speechless. Here's the critic, signing off.

I like this song creative!

Aaawww, that was so cute. My stomach was almost doing flip-flops with Kari's. Keep up the good work! (and thanx for reviewing my story too!)

Don't wear yourself thin (you said it was your first song fic and its in english, from what guesing is a problem for you)its pretty good and the song goes with it _

I luv it ! its ssssooo good! Write more!

Very nice .

Hola!

Hy!

como quieras!

bueno, sorry x lo del yaoi pero se supone que en esta histori (ESTA) los chicos no son gays! y les molesto que lo publique porque todos los burlarian!

chau y sory again!

That was good! I liked it a lot! You know, you probably should start to translate those other stories of yours into English. Maybe do them in parts and post them one at a time so you don't have to translate it all at once? I dunno, just a suggestion. Anyhoo, good fic! Keep writing!

I think it has lots of feeling. it was so sweet!

I love your songfic. You wrought the best story to go with that song.