Nice plagiarism! I mean, that's totally talent, am I right?

You just copied and pasted the entire game. Anybody who's played the game knows what happens, and in this case, the people reading this story are either retards, or they just don't care.

Either way, it's a piece of shit. I know what happens in the game. Do you? Obviously not. You add no plot of your own; no twists of your own; no changes; nothing. You're just copypasting the game. You know what that is? Plagiarism.

Reported. Plagiarism is a very serious offense, and if you have any dignity, take this POS down before the mods give you the banhammer.

Not bad, not bad. This is flawless and great, I can't wait for the next chapter since you took a low chaos. But this better

Not bad :D I really like the way you write.

Can't wait to read your interpretation of the escape.