|Reviews for The Forbidden Fruit|
| taramegareader 5/10/13 . chapter 1
I love mash and I love malcahyxoc's! Please update, I beg of you!
| SashaElizabeth 3/7/13 . chapter 1
You do ocs so masterfully.
| ImaLateBloomer 2/13/13 . chapter 7
Wow! What an intense chapter! Loved everything about it! Especially the way Amelia handled Hawkeye.
| hippiechick2112 2/7/13 . chapter 6
Yeah, sorry about not reviewing lately. Been so busy! But, I have been following along via mobile. And I find this, like the others, to be a nice read! It's great how you've developed as a writer and I am happy for it! :D
| samanddianefan10 1/29/13 . chapter 6
You write so well so eloquently. Very descriptive good job
| ImaLateBloomer 1/29/13 . chapter 6
Poor Amelia, she doesn't know what a good man Colonel Potter is. It's easy to understand why she would be afraid of him, given her past experiences with Colonel Turner.
Love to see the Father blush. It's one of the things that makes him so appealing! :)
I can't wait for the next chapter, but I'll try to be patient!
| samanddianefan10 1/28/13 . chapter 5
Good job I am really enjoying this and your style of writing is nice too
| ImaLateBloomer 1/20/13 . chapter 5
I loved everything about this chapter, but most of all that Father Mulcahy called on Amelia to tell the real truth. He is a gentle man, but not a naive one!
You've got me hooked on this story, can't wait to see what happens next!
| samanddianefan10 1/17/13 . chapter 4
so good! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next hopefully it won't be long!
| hippiechick2112 1/16/13 . chapter 4
Ha, don't be worried about long chapter! I've posted a chapter that 10 pages long in Word.
I like how this is going. And the whole Margaret/Amelia thing...I wonder where that's going, too, since this whole thing seems to be a bomb waiting to go off. And Colonel Turner, a friend of Colonel Potter's? That'll be interesting, to say the least. And, hopefully, he'll be on Amelia's side. Reminds me of an episode where a buddy of his screwed up and he didn't have the heart to report until later...
Keep going! I like this!
| ImaLateBloomer 1/16/13 . chapter 4
Once again, let me say that you have done a great job with the characters! Wow, the fact that Col. Potter knows Col. Turner is bound to make things more complicated. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| ImaLateBloomer 1/12/13 . chapter 3
Another great chapter! Major Houlihan, to put it mildly, is tough on her nurses. You would think she would be more understanding after what had happened to Amelia and Mary on their way to the 4077th.
Thank God for BJ's kindness. And most of all thank God for Francis John Mulcahy!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| hippiechick2112 1/11/13 . chapter 3
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I AM BACK!
Spelling, bleed and blood. Something keeps mixing them up. ;) And this chapter's title reminds me of another story that somebody wrote... :P
I like it a lot. Something's gotta be brewing between Fr. Mulcahy and Mary Baker somehow and Amelia and Margaret. Sounds in character for Margaret to be so mad at her nurses for calling her names and accusing her of things. So like them!
GOOD chapter! Cannot wait for the next. :D
| samanddianefan10 1/11/13 . chapter 3
Why haven't we seen more of your work before? This is brilliant! You write like a pro
| marleybear45 1/9/13 . chapter 2
I can't help but like a story about the Padre... Certainly interesting so far.