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| hydeandjackieforever20 2008-07-03 ch 6,  | abusehe he this was adorable...I loved it you should write more AAML soon! |
| Shuutastic 2008-04-29 ch 6, | abuseThat was exciting. Exciting, cute and very well written. Nice story... I enjoyed it very much. You have a great structure and the plot flowed very nicely. Excellent. |
| DeceivingSilence 2008-02-28 ch 6, | abuseGirl, I LOVE this story. The characters are IC, the plot is original, the shippy-ness is adorable and not overly sappy/cheesy, and I could go on. =] |
| crimson-obsidian-rose 2007-06-05 ch 6, | abuseWow, this is such an awesome story (hey, I'll bet you didn't expect to get a review for this story now, did you?) It was really well written and none of the characters were OOC. Totally awesome story!! Hey, I'll play virtual paintball with you. *Aims, and fires. Your jacket is covered in blue paint* SCORE!! |
| Twilight Equinox 2007-02-02 ch 6, | abuseNormally, I'm not a fan of stories that tend to be out of the usual world (Characters in High School, name dropping real bands or people, or in this case, no Pokemon), but this story is an exception. It is really well-written. I mean REALLY well-written.I was hooked to the story, the characters were depicted accurately, none of the dialouge felt forced at all and the final showdown at the end was absolutly ingenious. All around, it was just a fun, enveloping story. Anyone who has played paintball before can relate to it and unlike most fluffy romance stories, the gradual change from friendship to relationship was believable and well though out. Excellent story that I'll probably reread soon. |
| EVAN AAML 2007-01-23 ch 6, | abuseHello, this is EVAN AAML again, I am also the one who wrote the anonymous one that said evan. I really liked your story, it actually was one of the stories that inspired me to write, as you might see on my site. Anyway, I seriously should consider you to make a #2 of Love And War. You left it open, you can have Ash and Misty together, and you can have Brock, Tracy, Tyler, And Danny in it as well. Heck, I'll help you with it if it helps. And as for your challenge that you mentioned at the end of your story, I will accept. I too live in New York, but I grew up in Utica and moved to Lenox. sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml, ( EVAN AAML ) |
| EVAN AAML 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abusei'm putting you on my favorite's list, please see my aaml stories! sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml |
| Artemis Ignitan 2006-11-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseO.O YAYZ! A KISS! Quite a hilarious and affectionate story. Especially when they tricked Gsry. Priceless! |
| petites sorcieres 2006-09-19 ch 6, anon. | abuseIt was so great ! so cute! Wondeful! |
| evan 2006-09-17 ch 6, anon. | abusegreat jiob! i loved this story, though i think you forgot about brock, he's still probably in the forest! you should make one like this again! sincerely, evan |
| Rathan 2005-03-15 ch 6, | abuseThis is my fave story on , along with your starts fell on pallet ton series. well done... |
| Chaos-Paladin 2005-02-26 ch 6, | abusemy goodness that was a great fic! when she kissed his 'cheek', i practically facefaulted thinking "that was it?" but i knew he would pull through, very impressive technique and timing with some of the scenes! GOOD JOB! |
| Gamer135 2005-01-15 ch 6, anon. | abuseAwsome. Dude Awsome. |
| silver_streak 2004-08-17 ch 6, anon. | abuseoh! I loved it, the suspense was over-whelming! |
| soraoathkeeper 2004-08-16 ch 6, | abusen_n WOW! It makes me have the shives just reading it! *takes a long shakey breath* Just...wow. I can't explain it. WEll, maybe I can. PERFECT! |