What a beautifully chaotic piece of work! It's like reading a kaleidoscope. I'm still not sure I understood half of it, but I loved every second anyway. Well done!

I love the concept behind this piece, although I might have presented each part as individual chapters. I like how different scenarios play on very different facets of Imoen's character - some playful, some compassionate, some tragic. I particularly enjoyed the "Lady of Treachery" vignette - I found this to be the best written, especially with the juxtaposition of those jaunty, shanty-style lyrics against the darker theme of the piece. Very sophisticated.

The weaving of those well-loved lines from the game "the abyss stares back at you" etc. etc. was nicely executed also. And I found "Spellhaunt" quite compelling. But as I said before, "Lady of Treachery" really made an impression. Imoen's character seemed far better developed, and it packed such an emotional bite that I actually left me feeling a little disappointed that the following vignettes - although interesting in their own right - didn't quite measure up to the first.

Nonetheless, nice job, and as always, lovely to see your work up here :)