Love your story!

Thanks to everyone who took the time to comment my 1st ever P&D fanfic—it really helps to learn what appeals although loving D& P as I do, I try to write what I would like to see. Good critiques always improve your writing so thanks again! Am close to posting the first chapters of the next one so...T

Fantastic story without the sappiness. I can't tell you how
much I enjoyed it. Characterization is spot on!

Excellent job

I can hardly breathe! This is remarkable!

Fantastic! I enjoyed every word. Cannot wait for your next work!

this was one great work. can't wait til you start writing the in-between years. this work as is a perfect bookend piece. the beginning and the happily ever after. this is fanfic, we don't need character death. can't wait to hear from you again.

just finished this first chapter. can tell already that i am going to enjoy everything you write. i like the more assertive banter and demeanor of della and the way you move the action along. can't say enough about great writing skills either. i also like the idea of multiple chapters being presented at the same time and the length of this first one, originally thought it would only be 1 chapter; (didn't read the intro thoroughly to see it was a muti chapter entry ;) pleasant surprise. haven't finished this one and i'm already looking forward to your next story. KUDOS!

Wow, this sucked. ;-) Just kidding! Personally, I'm not fond of that "love you forever" thing, but it seems to fly with some readers (and other authors even) in this fandom, so you might actually be spot on with this! Same goes for the common classics you used: mistletoe and stuff...
The college and pre-law thing made me stop reading at first. Why? Coz I've always liked DS' secretarial background, a profession women seem to brush off as inferior these days, as if her intelligence would suffer had she "only" gone to business school. That's so post-feminist and modern - not very Rosie (whom you mentioned so aptly in an early chapter). But hey, it seems to be in vogue to attire the past in modern frock, so again: you seem to have hit the nail on public demand and thus found your audience. :-) Nicely done.

Loved it. Loved the mixture of young and old D & P. Looking forward to reading more from you. EE

Thanks, and I loved it. And thanks for your PM ...

Somehow this one didn't make it in order. Loved the 7AM or 7PM remark, she wanted to make sure job/date, giving Perry the choice. Interesting few minutes of watching each other from a distance. Love the fact Perry doesn't seem to know exactly what he's gotten himself into. Their in for one heck of a ride together. Love this.

Yessss! I haven't even read it completely and I want to say thank you for posting a new story, with young and old P and D. I absolutely love it!

Marriage never was in it for them. They remained committed to each other and didn't need the piece of paper which could have easily destroyed what they had. Nicely done. Really enjoyed this.

You just had to find Laura Robertson. Laura seems to be putting Della down right from the start. Della scares her on looks alone. Came back to the office, and at least told Della, Laura wasn't his girlfriend. Love the checked off list and not telling anyone, including Paul, letting him figure it out. At least they got it straightened out and will just find a way to keep their relationship between them. Loved his little present. Nicely done.